Okay, this story isn’t horrible, but it feels like I’m reading a rough draft. It’s rushed, things that should be climactic fall flat because there is no build up to anything. Characters are sobbed at us and then they either die or are killed off before we have a chance to get attached to them by love or hate. Kinda bored but just seeing where this goes at this point.
ivory.inkwell17
Okay, this story isn’t horrible, but it feels like I’m reading a rough draft. It’s rushed, things that should be climactic fall flat because there is no build up to anything. Characters are sobbed at us and then they either die or are killed off before we have a chance to get attached to them by love or hate. Kinda bored but just seeing where this goes at this point.